disorganized, unfocused, haphazard, uninspired, slapdash, unconvincing, incoherent, amateurish, ponderous, shambolic, scattershot, sloppy, unfocussed, uninspiring, turgid, insipid, listless, fragmented, unimaginative, stilted, jumbled, clumsy, cohesive, muddled, uncoordinated, lethargic, uninventive, patchy, ragged, overlong, woeful, repetitious, inept, inconsistent, chaotic, spiritless, desultory, lackadaisical, coherent, convoluted, slipshod, unaffecting, uncreative, uninteresting, aimless, ineffectual, forgettable, lifeless, predictable, unmemorable, unsatisfying, clunky, digressive, confusing, formulaic, fitful, unoriginal, unenlightening, unambitious, ropey, leaden, dull, stagey, dysfunctional, lackluster, unentertaining, unsynchronized, passionless, uneven, hackneyed, stale, unwieldy, fragmentary, overwrought, trite, comical, nervy, untidy, ineffective, flaccid, winded, frustrated, bland, erratic, disunited, torpid, shapeless, dissonant, cliched, perfunctory, rudderless, farcical, monotonous, pointless, scrappy, overdetermined, unimpressive, obtuse, sparse, lugubrious, halfhearted, flawed, disconnected, unconnected, banal, gossipy, connected, dreamlike, kaleidoscopic, bizarre, garbled

disjointedly

confused, disconnected, dislocated, disordered, divided, garbled, illogical, incoherent, injured, scattered, separated, unconnected