haphazard, slipshod, amateurish, disjointed, scattershot, shoddy, unimaginative, formulaic, shambolic, clumsy, uninventive, perfunctory, sloppy, artless, overlong, turgid, larky, ponderous, banal, farcical, tedious, uninspired, pedantic, unoriginal, flimsy, hackneyed, unconvincing, inelegant, ropey, trite, desultory, passionless, crass, unfocused, risible, insipid, stilted, unaffecting, digressive, convoluted, unentertaining, inept, bland, chaotic, muddled, pointless, pretentious, flawed, prolix, schlocky, uncreative, unfunny, laborious, unpoetic, overdetermined, overwrought, unenlightening, overfamiliar, dull, obtuse, jokey, tricksy, cavalier, gimcrack, hasty, superfluous, artful, twee, puerile, unmemorable, mirthless, prosaic, leaden, unrevealing, disorganized, jejune, maladroit, pythonesque, hokey, tacky, messy, lackadaisical, mawkish, clunky, charmless, spiritless, workmanlike, longwinded, ineffectual, hacky, pernickety, cheesy, piecemeal, cringeworthy, mise en scene, nonsensical, cliched, shabby, flaccid, sophomoric, tiresome, unadventurous, slovenly, businesslike, skelter, careless, cumbersome, improvisatory, routinized, straightforward, bungling, inartistic, meticulous, unconventional

haphazard, haphazardly

bang, bolt, careless, haphazard, slap, slipshod, sloppy, smack